I just finished reading an exciting chapter from Success Secrets of the Online Marketing Superstars by Mitch Meyerson. The particular chapter I read is called “The Magical Power of Headlines” by David Garfinkel.
David is extremely successful at writing “copy” for selling products, so he is a good person to pay attention to and listen to his advice. Check out his copywriting site to find out how good copy can make customers interested in what you have to sell — whether it is a product, web site, or blog.
In the chapter, David says that great headlines are what drives people to your “door”, so to speak. In fact, he claims 75% — 90% of an advertisement’s effectiveness comes from the headline! Without a good headline, your chance of success are nearly zero.
He says headlines have to:
- set the tone for what prospects are about to read
- create a mood so they will be receptive to action
- invite them to read more of your sales copy, article, or site
How do you overcome problems that poorly written headlines suffer? Poor headlines…
- Do not answer the “who cares” test. Your headline needs to evoke emotion and promise something your customer sees as valuable.
- Try to be cutesy or obscure. Don’t make your headline cute or obscure because they usually don’t lead to action. You need to get into their shoes and “feel their pain” by writing a headline that directly applies to their burning need or desire.
- Focus more on themselves rather than customer needs. Only write headlines that mean something to the customer, not just to you. While it might be great that your web site is endorsed by some authority, you need to tell them how your site or service will benefit them — and now rather than later.
Now that I’ve talked up the theory, I’ll let you in on a shortcut to writing effective headlines. You can take existing effective headlines and change them to fit your product or service pitch. Here are a few:
- The secret of {benefit of your product or service}
- Now you can have {benefit of your product or service}
- Get rid of {their problem} once and for all
You see how easy it can be?
Check out theis article at Copyblogger.com for more excellent examples:
Also, here are headline resources from David Garfinkel:
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